Friday, 21 August 2015

Hide And Seek

I'm ready come and find me!
The rotten food under the house smells like rubbish .
They will never find you under the house.
But they might see you.
you better do something.
He moved beside a log so he could not be seen.
The dirt is cold. They must be searching around the trampoline.
They're coming closer don't move they are gone it's time to let them know i'm the winner it's cold it's dark how long have i been hiding.

Thursday, 23 July 2015

Holiday highlights Alex D

In the holidays my family and i went skiing at mount cheese man and we stayed in darfield for three days. After we went to cheese man we went to porter heights ski field.At Porters we were on the intermediate slope The whole day. I only fell over 1 time and the rest of my family fell over heaps.

Tuesday, 2 June 2015

Planet six

Alex D

My plan -
Setting-My name is ...
Characters-Me tim, play dough creatures
Problem-They won’t stop fighting
Solution-I tell them to stop and to be friendly and the stop and listen

WALT 1:use commas, full stops, capitals.
WALT 2:use paragraph's.

My name is Tim
I have Just landed on a planet.
There is these aliens like play dough and there fighting with spears and I said ‘’what are you fighting about “
No one replied.
And then one of them said ’’ i’m right ‘’ and them another one said ’’ No i’m right ‘’ the keeped going at it.
Then i said ‘’stop fighting’’ both teams yelled out ‘’ ATTACK ‘’ Everyone was throwing spears. When someone got stabbed the spear went straight through there skin and it came out but they were fine and not even hurt. And i said stop fighting then they stopped and looked at me and the alien  said he says that he stole my ice cream then the other one said no i did not. I said hey we can buy you both an ice cream. Yay said both of them.

Tuesday, 19 May 2015

ww1 Life in the trenches


Dear Diary

it has been two days I’m dehydrated muddy and wet.
I will soon be moving up to the mountains and ridges.
All of our men are shooting and most of them are dying.
I haven’t killed so many people I was scard and my trigger on my gun was jammed so i grabbed another gun that a man dropped. I was aiming and i saw a sniper then i steadied my gun nicely and shot he was dead.
A moment later a  man called out ‘’MOVE UP!’’
Everyone stood up and ran to the next cover.
There were wooden boxes,stones ,ammo crates, pieces of wood and bomb holes.
I stood there and a man said to me ‘’Come on move cupcake?’’
So i moved up I saw a massive boulder that I could take cover from.
I ran then I saw some enemies on top of the mountain and ridges and how steep the terrain was.
I was shocked.

Thursday, 7 May 2015

flanders fields

In Flanders fields the bright red poppies blow lightly in between the crosses. the poppies mark are place it should of been the birds singing instead of the guns shooting below. 

We were the dead. 100 years ago we still lived fall dawn we were loved and were remembered by everyone now we lie in Flanders fields. 

Take up your anger with the foe to you from heart breaking we throw the torch it will be yours to hold don't let go.

If you break promise with us who die we shall not sleep peacefully by the poppies in Flanders fields.

Tuesday, 5 May 2015

My Anzac Story

Dear mother and father after getting on the rocky shore at Anzac cove the Australian and the New zealand solders including me are army fought the Turkish solders. most of the people around me were falling and then i knew this was the battle Field.

 i spotted a big bomb hole that the Turkish solders have done with there bombs and terrifying looking guns so i ran and jumped in it and i had cover. Everyone was shooting and a short time later the Turkish solders were all dead heaps of are people died too.

 we slowly struggled to walk up the massive ridges and when we got up the first ridge a few of are men slipped down the ridges and died at the bottom at the top of the first ridge we took cover behind the stones and objects.

 We were shooting at the Turkish solders at the top of the second ridge and once we killed all those solders we walked down the first ridge and when we were down and  they called in reinforcements.  Most of are solders we dieing so we retreated back to the beach.

 the golipolly campaign was lost.