Thursday, 1 September 2016

What Makes A good Paragraph

for the last 3 weeks we have been working on paragraphs and me and Jordan made a slide to show people how to make a good paragraph.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Alex D
    My name is Ofa and I am a year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School. I like how you are focusing and keeping on task. I like how you have circled the title of the goosebumps story so people know it's the title. I like how you have included punctuation because some people forget to use punctuation in there writing sometimes.
    You have done a good job!
    Keep up the great work.

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.