Greymouth, New Zealand
Hello Alex, Your Halloween story was great. I like the spooky cabin in the woods. The man with a knife sounds scary. I like the adjectives you have used. You need to work on finishing the story. Thanks for sharing this story.Kayden Haika
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Hello Alex,
ReplyDeleteYour Halloween story was great. I like the spooky cabin in the woods. The man with a knife sounds scary. I like the adjectives you have used. You need to work on finishing the story. Thanks for sharing this story.
Kayden Haika