Planet six

Alex D

My plan -

Setting-My name is ...

Characters-Me tim, play dough creatures

Problem-They won’t stop fighting

Solution-I tell them to stop and to be friendly and the stop and listen

WALT 1:use commas, full stops, capitals.

WALT 2:use paragraph's.

My name is Tim

I have Just landed on a planet.

There is these aliens like play dough and there fighting with spears and I said ‘’what are you fighting about “

No one replied.

And then one of them said ’’ i’m right ‘’ and them another one said ’’ No i’m right ‘’ the keeped going at it.

Then i said ‘’stop fighting’’ both teams yelled out ‘’ ATTACK ‘’ Everyone was throwing spears. When someone got stabbed the spear went straight through there skin and it came out but they were fine and not even hurt. And i said stop fighting then they stopped and looked at me and the alien  said he says that he stole my ice cream then the other one said no i did not. I said hey we can buy you both an ice cream. Yay said both of them.