Hi Alex. I really like the way that you have made your origami dog. Perhaps next time you could add more detail to your blog post eg: what you liked about it, what you found hard, what was the trickiest part of the instructions to follow. Remember to try and engage with your audience.
Hi Alex, I love your origami dog. Yesterday I was commenting on other people's blogs from your school, and I saw a lot of origami. I saw origami dogs, origami hearts and origami swans. Maybe next time you could add more detail to your post, like how you made it or what you enjoyed about making your origami dog. I can’t wait to make one of those!
Hi Alex. I really like the way that you have made your origami dog. Perhaps next time you could add more detail to your blog post eg: what you liked about it, what you found hard, what was the trickiest part of the instructions to follow. Remember to try and engage with your audience.
ReplyDeleteHi Alex,
ReplyDeleteI love your origami dog. Yesterday I was commenting on other people's blogs from your school, and I saw a lot of origami. I saw origami dogs, origami hearts and origami swans. Maybe next time you could add more detail to your post, like how you made it or what you enjoyed about making your origami dog. I can’t wait to make one of those!